Alfa Could use a little more flow with the N & K, and either go with the pen tip or with the splatter, not both

Bravo Yeah and I think it's two different styles that don't really work together - take out the splats or use different type

Charlie I think the line weight of the type isn't thick enough to match the size of the fountain pen tip. Probably also go with a lowercase k and try connecting it to the side of that n maybe, see if it works

Delta Black and white aren't vey popular on screen. love the idea, but to use the white as background you probably have to wrap in a square or in rectangular form, if you want to use as logo. for poster need more work.