Alfa I'd get rid of the 3D mocks and don't justify the text, it hurts to read.

Bravo Hi, it looks nice I would like to add, okay I would recommend that you cut down your explanation of your work. I would aim to have around 10 pages. I would also recommend and move all the text too the left, and removing coat hangers (one word on its own), but I think it is good. Just keep applying and maybe make a portfolio for specific jobs example web role show only web work.

Charlie @Bravo Thanks for the compliments! I'll work on these details. I made this over the weekend for a Visual Design job interview. I The interviewer was super rude, said all these was mish-mash that he didn't consider real work and it really threw me off. I worked for a year over that search UI design to figure out how to display media results in a simple way. So glad someone likes my work!

Charlie @Alfa thanks, you're right! I should find something that's easier on the eyes.

Bravo Remember it's not just you that is being interviewed it's them.. and if there rude it not an environment for you.