Alfa Hi, to all of you out there. This is a logo design i've made for one of the clients of the agency where i'm doing my education. I would love if you could tell me your opinion about my work, some trick to let it look better.. or anything you would like to say. I'm grateful to you all. Thanks! :)

Bravo Is the first line one word or 2? The second line bugs me that it's not centerEd and doesn't really need to tie into the monocle

Alfa the firs line is just one word.. bischofberger

Alfa thanks Bravo for your tip, i'll try to make it simpler :)