Alfa Looks like a bagel sliced in half with nutella and sprinkles on it. Try making the light brown darker 😊 Nice otherwise!

Bravo Agreeing with alfa completely. Maybe you can add some lights and shadows to 'round' it up a little? It's a nice start though.

Charlie Yeah totally agree on making it more "round" but its was being embroidered and/or screen printed so really was unsure on how far I coud push it... Thanks for feedback tho!

Bravo Ahh ok. I saw a picture on instagram today. A little girl was wearing a shirt with a similar design printed on it. Was wondering, if you were the designer. 😃 crazy https://instagram.com/p/BDrZNhTJM0Z/