Alfa solid font would be bettee iguess

Bravo Adjust the spacing between letters

Charlie I reckon big solid lettering in the centre, in a different colour and overlaying the illustrations would make for more of an album cover

Delta ^ do you know the music? How can you make a design choice by not knowing anything about the insight? Ps. The illustrations are well executed.

Charlie ^i know that in its current iteration, the type is the weakest part. Maybe my suggestion won't apply, but I'm saying that in my opinion another approach is needed

Delta The type just needs a little bit of 'kerning' attention that's all.

Golf Agreed. Illustrations look great.